Not that bad
This actually works, sure it's not the prettiest song ever. But life isn't pretty! And technically there isn't anything wrong with this song.
Not that bad
This actually works, sure it's not the prettiest song ever. But life isn't pretty! And technically there isn't anything wrong with this song.
can we haz sex k nao plz?
That was fun
It was pleasant and nice. Made me smile.
Glad it worked :)
Well!!!
This seems promising. Don't screw it up... haha, I know you wont.
There isn't enough...
Isn't enough music like this on in The Audio Portal. It's produced very well. The lead guitar was fantastic. Everything else is near perfect. Great job.
It is eh...
It starts out great. You have a pretty good rift going for you. I haven't heard the original, but it's good that you're working one it. Do you have a bass guitar? You should get ahead on contacting some one who does and maybe work a little bit on the bass for the song.
There is plenty of other things I could point out but I don't feel like boring you with mechanics and other things you're probably already aware of. Just keep plugging at it and you'll get it down perfect I'm sure.
Thanks for the review!
I actually just started writing a bassline today, I'll probably record that in the next couple weeks.
Your input is definitely appreciated, don't be afraid (at least with my stuff) to point out trivialities or boring stuff, I'm always open to learn from someone else.
Nice idea
The vocals come out a little weak. Better than anything I've ever recorded. It was a good effort, and I like hearing a song that has no synthesizers or drum loops it's different. Just work a little on the vocal delivery .
thanks very much for the comment! I keep getting told I need to work on my vocals, you're not the only one... I should probably go find a teacher in my area to help me get my voice up to par. I took a few lessons in the past but it seems like they weren't enough.
Anyways, thanks - I know I'll get good some day, or at least mediocre!
not bad
The rhythm and timing is really good. just add more to it. A few notes are off, like the last note, kind of doesn't fit for some reason.
Still it has the potential to be a good song.
Thanks for the review!
Yeah, I see what you mean, I tried to make it loop as I was finishing it off and it sounded O.K. in FL studio, but here it sounds a bit off, I agree.
amazing
The closest thing I could affiliate this sound to would be Evestus meets The Dust Brothers..... the beat is so energetic but the melodies are so calm.
Heh heh, I've heard of "the dust brothers". Might have to check out "Evestus". I'm glad you like the energy and the melodies my friend. Thank you for your ears.
I would have sung!
By the way this song is great, it's so delicious and moist.
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